سرگرمی‌های خانوادگی: بازنگری

Opening Paragraphs:Tina opened the door to find her older brother standing on the front doorstep, surrounded by a pile of suitcases."Ray!" she beamed affectionately, "Hi! How are you?""Fine, Tina! Real fine!" smiled Ray, giving his sister a big friendly hug.He lifted her bodily off the ground, wrapping his arms around her waist, pulling her strongly against his powerful, muscular body. Tina marvelled at the strength of her brother's grip. He had always been the athletic type, and the way he held her fragile body tightly against his muscular frame, sent familiar little shivers up and down her spine.